Hundreds of small characters are scattered across a white background. The figures vary in size, shape, posture, and orientation. Some are simple stick-like characters. Others feature more detailed bodies, clothing, and gestures. They depict a range of everyday life: people standing, walking, running, sitting, bending, stretching, dancing, jumping, reaching, talking, and listening to music. Some are happy, some are sad, and some are angry. Some are exercising, while others carry boxes, or hold umbrellas, or wave their arms. There are people facing forwards, backwards, and sideways. Some are shown individually and others clustered together. The figures are short and rounded, tall and slender, and some of the female characters are shaped like an hourglass. Some are heavily shaded, while others are outlined with minimal detail. The characters are arranged closely together, filling almost the entire frame. But one simple character stands alone, as if studying all the others.

What the best copywriters obsess over

They’re arguing again.

Two copywriters sit in the ‘Breakout Bar’ at a marketing event.

“Long-form copy is DEAD,” he declares. “No one reads an ad with more than a hundred words these days.”

She tosses her hands in the air. “Are you for real? Long-form sales pages are alive and well. Same goes for VSLs.”

“People don’t have time to read a whole letter dedicated to selling them something.”

He takes a sip of his drink.

“And video is different.”

“Whatever,” she says. “In my experience, long copy almost always wins in a split test against short copy.”

They go back and forth.

“Attention spans are shrinking…”

“You have to earn trust before the sale…”

“Not to mention, scroll fatigue…”

Nearby, a bartender starts pouring a pint. “Maybe you’re arguing about the wrong thing…”

The pair stop squabbling.

“I overheard a similar conversation, like 20 minutes ago.”

The glass slowly fills.

“One writer said it’s not about long copy over short copy or vice versa. It’s about the prospect’s state of awareness.”

That’s why the best copywriters start with the audience—they obsess over it.

Sure, the offer and medium matter. So do price and business objectives.

The people on the other end matter more. Because they influence your decisions about all of those things.

The bartender pushes the tap back and admires her pour. “Apparently, some old copywriter wrote about it in a book…”

“Breakthrough Advertising. Have you heard of it?”

~

Want words that matter to your market?

I’m Cory, copywriter and strategic storyteller for brands that put craft—and the human—first.

My calendar is now open. Let’s chat.

The image is a close up of three pencils. The pencils are laying flat with the tips angled towards each other. Each tip is broken, with bits of lead strewn about the ends of the pencils. The image suggests a writer or artist is trying to master their craft, taking multiple attempts to get a particular piece of writing or artwork right.

Leave a Reply

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.